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Shooting Stars

I think I’ve waited my whole life,
To find some who would treat me right,
And then he comes along,
In the middle of my sorrowed song.

He came at the worst time,
He came at the best time,
He opened me up for love,
He came at the worst time,
He came at the best time,
He made me believe in true love.

I was due for that miracle,
I was waiting for my turn,
He’s like a shooting star,
That brought me back to earth…

He came at the worst time,
He came at the best time,
He opened me up for love,
He came at the worst time,
He came at the best time,
He made me believe in true love.

I’ve waited my life for a happiness,
That I could call my own,
And finally he brought it to me,
With a smile and a ‘Hi’.

Tonight we will sing of our love.

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Written August 4th, 2004

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  • TheLittleThings
    January 13, 2005
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    This could be like a song or something. Hope you did well in the contest.

  • twiztidjenn2oo7
    August 27, 2004
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    really good. i hope that you do really good in the contest and what not. well, good luck. peace
    ~jenn

  • LostParamour
    August 18, 2004
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    Thanks for entering my contest... Good luck!!! I'll make meaningful comments when I judge the poems... I'm just thanking everybody for entering...