Your gentle kiss on my cheek
is all it took.
Now every time I dream, I dream
of your soft lips embracing
my face.
You were so gentle but, yet
still firm.
Was this to prove to me that
you can be in control of
your feelings in front of
others ?
Or are you trying to show
me that you could be
sensual no matter who's
around.!
No matter to me because
your kiss felt like
butterfly wings on my
cheek.
So soft and gentle, I
didn't want it to end.
Even though your kiss
lasted only a second.
It will remain in my
memory for eternity.
Yvonne J. Griffin
06/10/02
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Dreams last forever....
Written June 10th, 2002
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great write I love the simple way you made it all work together, I think you have great talent.
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don't touch it!
A beautiful write and expression of an event. Your pulled mixed emotions from me as the reader. I am always the impossible romantic, so I say treasure the memory forever! Terrific work! I'll read some of your other work. So many authors so little time! thanks for sharing God Bless You -
excellent
just beautiful....extremely great write...i love the soft imagery....
thanks for sharing.
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don't touch it!
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very beautiful words :) -
excellent
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beautiful feeling Yvonne
very nicely done
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Thanks for the beautiful comments. :)
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excellent
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dreams do last forever,, nicely done..
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