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Precious to me

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Do you know how precious you are to me?
How much you mean to me my sweet love!
for without you my life would be agony.
You bring joy to my life beyond all else,
would that I could be with you always.
I have come to love you with a love
so deep, it takes my breathe away.
To know you felt the same way my love
would bring me great happiness and joy.
To feel your kisses on my face, my neck,
to feel you caressing my back is heaven.
Never do I want to lose your love
for you are precious to me.

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Written August 4th, 2004

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  • shubs
    August 6, 2005
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    A wonderful treatise ,not that it would have been different...vivid capture of a game known to both the male and the female of species from time immemorial...good write--Shubs

  • abdulrahman
    August 27, 2004
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    To feel your kisses on my face, my neck,
    to feel you caressing my back is heaven.
    Never do I want to lose your love
    for you are precious to me.

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    make more percfect this is nice just like mine power of love just read

  • abdulrahman
    August 27, 2004
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    this poem is nice i gues espciallyDo you know how precious you are to me?
    How much you mean to me my sweet love!
    for without you my life would be agony.
    You bring joy to my life beyond all else,
    would that I could be with you always.
    u started well n end it well