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losing all i had

today you left,
with no good-bye,
you just left,
and thought  that it was fine,

when finding out,
it hurt like hell,
just to know,
that my ONLY friend was dead.

no more smiles on your face,
just being with you,
made everything okay.

you always knew what to say,
when times were bad,
you were my best friend,
the ONLY one i had.

but now that your gone,
i must move on,
but i know my best friend will be with me,
until my day comes.

its time to move on,
now that your gone,
even tho your not here,
your spirit will keep on.

~R~I~P~
Mark ~AKA Cory~*~
2/8/1988~8/3/2004

Author notes

its just a lil somethin i came up when i found out about corys death! it hit me really bad to where i was cryin so bad i couldnt breath
Written August 3rd, 2004

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  • brokenheart3
    January 12, 2007
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    sad

    very touching


  • brokenheart3
    January 12, 2007
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    sad

    very touching

  • brokentenchi gold member
    August 21, 2004
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    Excellant

    Brittany....It was a good poem but member what you told me about niki? You have to move on and they would want you to be happy. If u need me u kno where to find me.

  • DreamsShattered
    August 3, 2004
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    yeah but he killed himself... with a gun

  • Dee Death Strike
    August 3, 2004
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    Good Poem

    It is a very good poem...i'm sure your friend appretiates it. I'm sorry about your loss, but they're in a better place now, and no one likes to see their friends grieve, so live a happy life...they're always there

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