Look deep into my eyes.
See my heart and soul.
For through them you'll know
My silent words speak no lies.
Touch my gentle hands.
Let me pull you near me.
Silence, stillness, just be.
I make no demands.
Receive the warmth of my face.
Skin upon skin meet.
Heart to heart in sync beat
As we so gently embrace.
Feel my hand as it moves
Gently up and down caressing
Our souls to each undressing
As intimacy of touch soothes.
Allow my hand to descend,
Moving slowly along your arms,
Still enraptured by your charms,
As our intimate embrace ends.
Author notes
I was going to title this "Cyber Hug" but when I finished it didn't fit. 
Written August 3rd, 2004
In a list
A contest entry
- Make Me Smile by PurpleSky.
300 points, ended August 6, 2004, 17 entries
Silver trophy winner
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
What did you think
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very nice, very lovly, i love the first part, under your words, or whatever it was exactly i can see it alot in my memories when you want birds to get what you are really saying or like what you are really feeling, this is beautiful keep writing
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Sensual indeed
I love it
Good luck in the contest to me its a winner
Applause applause lol
Love n hugs
Susan~~~
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A Very Heartfelt Poem
This is so wonderful, the romantic feeling pops right off the page as I read it. I love it. -
I'm impressed with your poems too. Thanks for such high praise. I have a loving family and good friends just no spouse or girlfriend.
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now THIS is great! I can only dream of being able to write this beautifully. How lucky you are, and your life must be filled with the most tender love!
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Glad you liked it. I've done 'cyber hugs' before but not like this. It took you and your contest to inspire this.
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i agree with purple sky^^hell of a dicription!
Receive the warmth of my face.
Skin upon skin meet.
Heart to heart in sync beat
As we so gently embrace.
^^^^^^that was the best part to me you did such an excellant job! keep it rockin' til later
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weeeeeeee
now that is one heck of a description for a hug 
this made me smile most definatly so thank you. Your such a sweetheart!
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awwwwww!! hope you win the contest!! it made me smile!! lol....
~JacK~ (w/fangs!)
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