Below the phantom moon he stalks his prey
Moon hunter, mischief of midnight
One down, four to go before the light of day
Blood thirsty weak and famished he must feed
In sync with the moon,immortal is his stride,
All for blood, blood for all, his spirit creed
Dark tempter of the night eternally,
With serpent fangs he yearns to pierce your flesh
Into your arms he will charm you hypnotically.
Within your veins his poison blood shall mesh
His night without a day has just begun
Night he is alone,he is just one
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Written June 9th, 2002
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Good one
Not as strong as the others but still a fine poem and dare I say better than most I read on this site. Alas I continue on reading your collection. I must hurry for daylight is coming!
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Once again, awesome. I enjoy how you write from different views and it all flows so great.
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this is an unexpected side of you. here i keep seeing this innocent, fragile looking blonde when in reality you become the Vampire woman. cool. will need to look at a few more before i form an opinion.
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well done stronge words stornge emotion.
DimishedFaith -
i love this poem the way it is worded makes me feel like the vampire is accually stalking me accross a grassy dell.
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thy dark tales whisper into oblivion
where crimson smiles hold into shadows
celebrated in the night!
Yessssss
I did enjoy!
keep penning on my friend!
Bill
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ur a pro writter, how long have you been writing for? a awesome vampire movie is.. Interview with the vampire... *off to look at more of your poems*
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How is it I never knew you had a collection of vamp writes? Especially since you and I have one posted with the same name. LOL
wonderful write! I enjoyed its dark edge immensely!
I have to get to bed but shall be back for more!
hugs my friend..
Mary Ann -
oh yes, the blood lust... the hunger. let he who is thirsty... drink.
amazing write...
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Loved It
Ooooooooh! Loved this one toooo~ Like them all darn it~ Need to keep reading and keep on writing~ Beautiful poem and the vampire is right at home~ Can't wait till the next one
~ Big hugs and much love~ Desire 
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I really love this poem very much. I write about vampires as well and I read about them all the time.
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i like this alot and i like how you described the vampire good job
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This is some really amazing work hon I love it. ~Storm aka Rachel
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this was really good I like it alot . I think that you did avery very good write here. I thank you for shareing it
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don't touch it!
i loved the rythm of this poem... it keeps you with the intensity of the subject of the poem... you stay with the vampire and arent permitted to look away for a second, just as i imagine a vampire would have it -
don't touch it!
BitemeBitemeBiteme....sorry, got carried away.
Love the vamp pieces.
Keep it up.
Vangs for sharing this -
excellent
You have some awesome vampire poems. One thing wrong though... Ond should be one in the third line. -
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I am covering up my neck after that. Vam,pires alwaysa treat. Perhaps a little short but satisfying -
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very cool, vampires always seem to attract peoples attention...you should do more and do some on werewolfs...but great write -
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awesome imagery! i've always been fascinated with vampires -- great piece -
don't touch it!
Love it....!
so much imagery pulls you in....until.....
:)
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excellent
wow this is fantastic,you should read my challenge poem its called Kindred:love of the dead -
lol staying home not venturing out lol
Thanks all
Susan! -
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Makes me wanna go bite someone. consequently what are your plans for tonight ;). -
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what it needs is more detail to draw the reader in.
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lol i figured that one Bill
Thanks tho
Susan -
excellent
Its not bad...But I prefer the first one
Bill
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