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Traducers

Abhor apparent,
Those malicious tyrants;
Flaws never justified,
But their slanders never
fail to misguide...

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Written August 3rd, 2004

A contest entry

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  • eternalpoet
    September 8, 2004
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    5 stars *****

    woah .. i mean wow.. this is such a nice write... thought short, but meanigful, though small but thought provoking... great write... may be cos you are my sis... ... hehe.. nah belive me.. the write here is small.. but i know how difficult it is to make people understand in such a small write... nice way to convey your thinking about this world... take cares and have a nice time my dear aditi/apurva... just keep it up LITTLE (as some one here said you little ) sis... your humble little humane friend /brother .... ... ... .... - vic ( who else? )

  • Bojju
    August 9, 2004
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    Briliant

    hmm now now i object somebody says u littile girl u are having maturity that most of the people dont have , nd yyes politics or ugly ruling by supremos ur line stated the facts
    wonderfull works

  • Muted Delirium
    August 8, 2004
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    Very, very profound write. Your message was very clear, and whats more, is that you've managed to do it in only a few short lines. Nice job with this--and congrats on your trophy

  • mina nagi
    August 8, 2004
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    This is well said and well deserved to win Gold... well done... keep on writing... you've a great talent...
    mina


  • Poet Raja
    August 4, 2004
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    Excellent

    Short and to the point. this can apply to many kinds of people and one that is very true.

    Wonderful insight from a girl so young. You are brilliant, little girl

    Love from India - Joel -

  • a u r a
    August 3, 2004
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    applaudable

    few words but deep message -applaudable

  • Zyco
    August 3, 2004
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    In looking at this poem, I originally thought, "ugh, politics"...but then I realized, that it could also be speaking of things like school teachers, bosses, and even jocks. Excellent job in getting your point across in few words
    >>Zyco<<


  • Pierre Richards
    August 3, 2004
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    excellent!

    So many leaders are guilty about this. You said a lot in such few words about many of the world's leaders in past and present.
    I would say that the UN has a bunch that fits such discription.

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