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Don't

Don't touch me like that
You touch makes me forget to breath
Don't tell me you love me
Your love is so deep I could never match it
Don't tell me you need me
Your need is too great and I'll kill myself trying
Don't don't don't

Don't caress me like that
It makes me never want to be caressed by another
Don't talk to me like that
Your words make me forget to think
Don't tell me you want me
You want overcomes mine and I can hardly move
Don't don't don't

Don't tell me to stop
I never want to stop doing anything with you
Don't tell me to leave
My heart would break and I would die
Don't tell me you love me
I love you but I know it's not as much
Don't don't don't

Don't tell me those things
I want to live with my lies and not see the truth
Don't show me these things
My fantasies were too good to be true
Don't tell me you need me
You make me shatter all my dreams just to be with you
Don't don't don't

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Written August 2nd, 2004

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  • Calisto
    August 4, 2004
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    Thank you! ^_^ My brother is making a so out of it because os exactly that reason.

  • emajination
    August 2, 2004
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    this is really good, it has rhythm.

  • Sky Pilot
    August 2, 2004
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    This=awesome. I never knew you wrote such good poetry! I hope you post more, soon

    Much love

    Buddha