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In the Mirror

Every morning, of every waking day
It all begins the same
The pointless existence replays
In a never ending rerun

You're such a disgrace
I hate you so much
Why must you plague my life?
To leave me with nothing again?

I wish that you never existed
I despise all that you do
You live such a fake lie
That's why you're easy to see through

Happiness is deflected
Off your frozen heart within
You'll never understand me
Since you'll never know yourself

Pathetic girl, you just dont see
How much this world isnt meant for me
I want to leave the pretending behind
So I will not be hurt again

No one will notice
No one will care
All those times you've needed help
They were never there

But still I'll wait for answers
From the weeping reflection in the mirror
I shake my head and walk away
I cant take this anymore

Author notes

gah...its a pity that i forgot the EXACT reason why i wrote this...*hits head on wall* no. i forgot.
o well. atleast i can say that i dont really like myself most of the time. i question my existance everyday.
Written June 11th, 2004

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  • August 3, 2004
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    Well a lot ov people dont like themselves. Its more like a natural thing than anything. Hm. I kant really say much tu this poem coz i think very similar, but i kan realte tu it somehow, and it is a great work. I hope you feel better.