BUNGALOW BY THE BAY
Remember how we anticipated the summer's arrival,
and the visions we had of the sweltering hot sun?
How we froliced and play in the ocean's white foam,
spending days making memories having lots of fun?
It was the time of year we could both be carefree,
would try to forget all our worries and our woes,
Remember troubles seemed so distant, far away,
recall the wet sand sinking around all of our toes?
Think about rubbing each other with sun tan lotion,
how we turned our snow white skin into golden tan.
We would ride the coaster at least ten times a day,
eat hot chili dogs for lunch at the hot dog stand.
we would sat and dangled our feet off the long pier,
the fish would keep biting on our hooks all day,
Do you think about watching the evening sunsets,
the beauty of shadows being cast across the bay?
My mind recalls the moonlight walks on the beach,
how they refreshed our minds to enjoy another day.
Spent our summers in total pleasure and relaxation,
our hot summers at our bungalow by they bat.
Remember watching fireworks drift into the ocean,
how they glistened as each wave kept rolling in.
Sitting arm in arm on the beach blanket and kissing,
feeling romantic sipping our drinks of tonic and gin.
Do you recall our precious memories of summer fun,
how sad we were when our summer was through?
Willyou remember when the cold winter snow falls
will your heart be warmed by sweet memories too?
Author notes
Seaside Heights and Wildwood fun
Memories of so many summers at the New Jersey shore.
Written August 1st, 2004
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This is a story. A lot of good, strong images in here. I felt like I was actually reading this as a book. Amazing job with this one.
Gabby -
WOW
This is a great..story almost! I LOVED IT! Thanks for sharing
Mylee -
Sandygram, you make me smile! I grew up in Marlboro, and spent a lot of time in the same places, especially Asbury Park and Sandy Hook. I even took a Marine biology course at the research station at the very point of the 'Hook'. I had family in Edison and would often go to Tom's River to shop.
~laughing~
Glad to find a 'homegirl' here...
You'll find yourself on MY favorites list, as well!
Take care,
Serenem -
Thank you so much for thw lovely comment. I enter contest to meet other poets such as yourself that I may not meet otherwise. I see you're a Jersey girl too. I lived in Edison growing up for 20 years and then Toms River for 10 years while married. I moved to Tamaqua Pa in 1975. I wrote this poem about all my summers at the Jersey shore in Seaside Heights and Asbury Park. Well take care and thanks, I'll put you on my favorite list.
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Lovely, touching
Sandygram,
This is a beautiful poem, full of wistfulness and nostalgia-- which made it very heart touching and sweet. I really admire this poem very much.
Congratulations on your win in this contest; it is VERY well deserved!
I'm going to search out more of your work, based on the talent displayed in this poem!
Regards,
Serenem -
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this was a good poem. I relaly liked the questioning thing. I think maybe you chose this poem after reading my poem stream? maybe not. Same style thing. anyway it was nice.
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This is great! I especially liked the last stanza. I always remember summer ( even if I don't get a tan, just a burn
).. Thans for the entry and good luck
pinkwhite xxx -
Good luck in the contest- this was a really romantic description of summer which I liked a lot Thanks for commenting on my story
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