If I prove myself
Intelligent
Does that make me more than just
Eye candy
For you to
Bite down on
When I swing my hips and
Lick my lips
Do I lose A little
Respect
Is my reputation wrecked
If I have an opinion
On the decisions of our
Nation
Do I look a little less
Sexy
A little less soft
If I put shimmer on my chest and
Push up my breasts
Does that make me intellectually behind
If I push play on one
Must the other
Rewind
NO
Because I'm a woman with long legs and
Purple toes
And when I open my mouth my
Mind flows
While the swell of my breasts attracts you
Sexually
The strength of my personality keeps you
Permanently
My conversation sparkles with
Passion
And in the face of humor my laughter will
Crash in
SO
Kiss me for my
Sexy curves
But
Love me for my
Way with words.
Author notes
Written July 31st, 2004
A contest entry
- I am worth it! (Women only) by Erotic Dreams.
400 points, ended May 14, 2007, 12 entries
Gold trophy winner
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
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I really really like this, fully what i am looking for, i love it! it is sweet simple and brutally honest, thankyou so much for entering this, it is at the top of my list atm, yay. I must admit, the purple toes bit went over my head but the rest...fabulous much love-Zandy
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You're awesome
Thank you. My little sisters really like this one too.
~Aurora
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I mean purple toenails, but the added syllable messed with the flow. So I just left it out.
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wow. The last stanza blew my socks off. I have no negative comment for this, at all
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Sexy
I think all women have that fear, that we can't be both sides of ourselves, but you have to find someone who loves you for who you are. I love the poem. It flows perfectly.
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Sweet
I feel the same way and can never get it on paper. You handled this piece well and I can tell that you can hold your own. You sound a little like me. -
Bravo
You just keep telling it like it is. Excellent poem 
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Splendid
This was very wonderfully written! Im very impressed, you did a wonderful job, Id like to read more! Splendid!
-Kay -
Way to go...LOL..being a church mouse ..I wouldn't know..but love the poem
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I love this. Goes to show that women can be sexy and beautiful and even more so because of their mental capacity. Intelligence and cleverness go a long way.I like the sassy style and rhyme. Good work.
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oh my god this is soooo dieing to be a song, this was awesome, it flowed so well, gahhh where did you hide this poem? this was soooo good
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Lol. I like that. sounds like just about the perfect girl. good stuff. And a very humorous and good style.
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