I thought that I could never be
All the things you wanted me to be
But one touch of this rose for you
Showed you what I wanted to do
I wanted to be your one reason
To forget all the hate and treason
So take this blue rose now, my love
And I'll show you all the stars above
My heart is craving for your heart
I knew you were mine, right from the start
But fear and sadness took over you
Made me wonder if we were truly through
But you smelled the rose once more
It stopped you from walking out the door
With me, you're starting over new
Because of this one rose of blue
You've found a reason to be
All the things you want to be
Now show me the blue rose, my love
So I can see all the stars above
Author notes
Written on 1st August 2004 at 03:09 GMT
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A contest entry
- Celestial Rose by scintillescence.
400 points, ended March 11, 2005, 23 entries
Bronze trophy winner
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
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realy good!! very sweet..tell if you will why a blue rose...i think it's realy cool..i love blue roses (deep red ones are my #1 though)
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The power of one rose, good write.
prince -
This is a beautiful love poem. It's also unique, I've never heard mention of the blue rose, perhaps it is some personal symbolism. I like how you first give him the rose and show him the stars, then you ask him to do the same. Wonderfully written, best of luck in the contest
Becky
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Very sweet piece...nice flow....
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nice
Very different, and a very great job well done. Nice work. I like the whole imaginatation that wanders through my mind with this piece. Great work
-scotty
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is glad Laura decided to enter Thanks for entering love. This is wonderful... I wonder who this could possibly be about.
Love it hun. Awesome write good luck and thanks for entering.
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Excellent
Congratulations!!!! You deserved to win the Bronze Cup. A very romantic poem with an intriguing rose of blue.
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i love it! thanks for entering!
-midget-
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