In love
with ideals.
The image
of love
appeals.
Looking at
windows
to the soul,
not through them.
Heart shaped
candy,
valentines cards,
Red
love hearts
are all you
see in me
(in love)
Author notes
Type 8
A contest entry
- Love by a-face-in-the-crowd.
450 points, ended February 7, 2008, 21 entries
Honorable mention
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest - Types Of Love(NEED TYPE 1 BEFORE JUDGING) by Blooming Poet.
300 points, ended March 31, 2008, 16 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
What did you think
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AHHH infatuation, its been a while, but I stll remembeer it. Love this part:
In love
with ideals.
The image
of love
appeals.
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Fantastic
I love this poem so much. It flows really well, and is simple and yet complex at the same time.
"In love
with ideals.
The image
of love
appeals."
These were great lines, which perfectly illustrate the shallowness of some peoples 'love'. Amazing!
Thanks for entering my contest!
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I love the line "In love with ideals. The image of love appeals." The flow of your poem is great. It's simple yet in a less is more sort of way. Thanks for commenting on adore. I haven't been back to this site in awhile. Good to see your new stuff.
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Fabbie!
Nice! To point out all of love's cliches and then poke fun at it! Refreshingly creative and short. (I tend to get bored with long poems.) Thank you for commenting on "Youth". I left my extra "continue".. but it's supposed to drag it out more. Your opinion was greatly appreciated. I must go read more of your work! -liBBy -
I think you put into a simple poem just what it feels like to be in love. You write about all the happy feelings you feel once you find that special person to love.
Thanks for commenting on my poem "What You Did To My Heart." I really appreciated it.
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