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Purple Sky

You painted me a purple sky.
The sun rose over my deep valleys
Of pain, anguish and despair.

I saw a landscape of mountains high,
Violet solid rock and white glacier snow
Over buried feelings of love and hope.

My earth quaked and yelled a silent cry
Colors faded and dripped of blood red
As all my hopes sunk into deeper despair.

I had sold my entire life to buy
A painting on a canvas of deception,
Lies of love masking fear and insecurity.

Now my canvas is barren and dry.
But I will find the old paint I left behind
And will paint a new picture of bright colors.

From my valley I will look to the sky
With renewed sense of hope and love.
As I imitate the Master artist of grace.

Author notes

For PurpleSky who took a huge risk and is now heartbroken but leaning on her Heavenly Father and hanging onto hope and love.
Written July 31st, 2004

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  • PurpleSky
    January 6
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    WHOO HOOOOO!!!!!!!!!!!!! BOY WAS HANGING ON WORTH EVERY BIT OF THE PAIN FOR THE LOVE I HAVE NOW SOARS SO MUCH HIGHER AND HERE I SAT THINKING I HAD NO HOPE LEFT......GOD IS SO GOOD TO ME. HE REACHED DOWN FROM THE HEAVENS AND GUIDED MY SOUL STRAIT INTO THE ARMS OF THE MAN THAT IS MEANT TO LOVE AND BE LOVED BY ME FOREVER!!!!!!
    GOD BLESS YOU MY DEAR FRIEND!


  • melphleg gold member
    January 21, 2005
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    Thank you. It's nice to hear from you again. I'm glad things are better for you.

  • PurpleSky
    January 19, 2005
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    I see you won a trophy on this congradulations! I was just going through some of the things people have written me so I can put links on my author page and again thank you for your friendship and for being there for me when I needed someone most. It amazes me where I was and how far I have come. I am far from broken and soaring higher than I have ever been. God bless

  • Just Rachael
    October 8, 2004
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    This is a beautiful tribute and beautiful words to express His saving grace even and especially amidst our most barren, depleted moments. I loved the imagry in this poem and the surging hope and trust displayed therein! Lovely, wonderful write!


  • philosphyofkate
    August 7, 2004
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    *bows*

    this is absolutely beautiful. i have no words.. but it is wonderful when we can give our works to those we care about.


  • duana
    August 6, 2004
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    mel, PLEASE GO TO THE AP HUG CONTEST TO READ IMPORTANT NEWS FOR ALL CONTESTANTS.


  • duana
    August 1, 2004
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    wow. This is really nice. You created a painting with words! Purplesky is going to love this!


  • rufina caraid gold member
    August 1, 2004
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    A lovely heartfelt poem for Lena who needs lots of hugs at the moment.
    Wonderful treasure such as this mean so much to people not just for the moment but also in years to come. It's lovely and the 4th stanza is very powerful.
    Good Luck with this one.
    ~Von~


  • Blushfulmoon silver member
    August 1, 2004
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    This was beautiful to do for our PurpleSky
    I am thrilled she liked it
    It is a beautiful poem chock full of imagery
    Nicely done and good luck in the contest
    Huggles
    Susan~~~


  • mars
    August 1, 2004
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    What an incredibly beautiful poem. Not only due to the amazing gesture but also from the picture of words you have created. It flowed smoothly and rolled off the tongue when read aloud. Bravo!

  • pozo
    August 1, 2004
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    Great poem, and a great tribute I liked it a lot The imagery was great


  • NurseHayley
    August 1, 2004
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    Awwwwwwwww what a great person to write about Our PurpleSky is a lil treasure Fantastic stuff and I am sooo pleased she liked it She needs to smile more, even if it hurts inside.
    Take care
    Hayley x x


  • lilbitsassy
    July 31, 2004
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    Excellent

    This is a wonderful write and it is for a wonderful person. Lena took a huge risk to move to California to be with the man that she loves with all her heart. But unfortunately things didn't work out.And my heart goes out to her.It is never easy having to move on from a relationship especially if you still love that person. All I can say now is that I hope that she will be ok and she will get over the pain that she is feeling now.She is such a sweet person and she deserves nothing but happiness. I thought you did a remarkable job with this write. You do have my praise and my applause.~Alexis~

  • PurpleSky
    July 31, 2004
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    this made me feel so special. thank you so much hun you are such a sweetheart. I love this write and I will hold it dear to my heart

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