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Galatians 3:28

Galatians 3:28 - “There is neither Jew nor Greek, slave nor free, male nor female, for you are all one in Christ Jesus.”

Jesus doesn’t stop to count the money
In the salary you earn from your career
Doesn’t analyze your nationality
Before He saves you from sin and draws you near
Age-discrimination never reaches His Kingdom
Sinful history is erased and made new
He doesn’t mind that you’ve made bad choices
Just as long as you can follow He who is true
The place where you were born and the tongues you speak
None of this gives Him a second thought
‘Cause it wasn’t the cash that He has been after
But simply, it’s the loyal faith that He’s sought

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This poem that I've written is based on the verse Galatians 3:28, taken from one of Paul's motivating letters to the town of Galatia.
Written July 30th, 2004

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  • melphleg gold member
    August 3, 2004
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    i think you summed this verse (Rom 2:11 NAS For there is no partiality with God.
    Forgiveness is available to all.
    One minor thing
    "Just as long as you can follow He who is true" I think reads better as "Just as long as you can follow Him who is true"