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His Love Endures Forever

1 Chronicles 16:34: “Give thanks to the LORD , for he is good; His love endures forever.”

Forever will God’s love endure
As the world continues to spin
It never fades the slightest bit
And is offered even though we sin
Forever will it strengthen
He pours His love to all
It’s strong enough to move a mountain
And to rise the weak as they fall


The roses must wilt
And the sunlight must fade
All the dancers must end
Their sweet promenade
All good days must pass
And all the smiles will grow dull
The children wont stay young
Nor will the moon remain full
But one thing will not change
It is the Lord’s love and grace
Like an eager contestant
In life’s eternal race

Author notes

I wrote this poem on behalf of an inspiring sripture from the Old Testament, 1 Chronicles 16:34.
Written July 30th, 2004

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  • GOT-XO
    April 2, 2005
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    very descriptive

    AWSOME! THIS POEM ROCKED MY WORLD!!!!!!!!<3
    :love: lola
    PS could you plz check out one of my poems? It would be like returning a favor ya know?

  • redrum
    November 26, 2004
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    wonderful!

    this is great!! i really like it!! i love the descriptive-ness in it, lol! great write!