Restless sleep,
Nothing to keep,
My broken soul,
In the dark it weeps,
Stormy nights,
Shattered dreams,
Silent tears,
Open wounds,
Bloody fears,
Screaming stars,
Wandering far,
Nowhere to find,
Its only in my mind,
Voices of the dead,
All inside my head,
Withered wishes,
Wretched woe,
Nowhere to go,
Soluble hope,
How can I cope?
Author notes
this is a prewrite and i commented on the poem -.¸¸.·´¯) Hate -.¸¸.·´¯) by CoriolisNectar
Written July 30th, 2004
A contest entry
- Catch me if you can... by Scindr.
300 points, ended March 18, 2005, 22 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest - fighting to survive by B.bdawn.
300 points, ended February 5, 2008, 15 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
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wonderfully written, although it was only supposed to be fifteen lines or less. despite your short lines your message certainly came across. My favorite lines would have to be, "wondering far, nowhere to find." I feel we all do that far too much in our lives.
Keep up with the amazing writing.
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Thank you,but i didntrealize it had to be 15 lines but i did read the rules sorry bout that.,thats why I chose this prewrite too because it was the shortest one I had that got the message across.
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