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I love you

When I go to write this poem
My words are kind of blank
I find that nothing can explain
No words can express
the way i feel for you
I know i barely know you
but its like love at first sight
but different
I know this is love I can't have
For so many reasons
I saw it comming all along
I couldn't stop myself
I was getting into something
That wouid just break my heart
But I didn't care
I had to tell you how I felt
How could anyone not fall in love
with someone like you?
All I can say...I know it won't mean much
but all I can say
Is I love you, I love you alot

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Written July 30th, 2004

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  • July 31, 2004
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    Great Write! I loved your good expression of emotions! Keep on writing!

    ~Ashley Marie~


  • July 30, 2004
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    Nice

    Niceley written. Keep up the good work.

    - šÖš Lost (Lyn) šÖš -