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Dumb Bitches

If they called you a whore get over it, you must be
Trying to play the shit off
Play it off like it was me
It wasn't me you dumb bitch
I wouldn't waste my breath a you
you all looking like fucking Boy George, Bitch it's the truth
Fucking wearing too much make up
Looking like a slut
When really your trying to cover up, how your face looks like a butt
Typing this I am laughing, How I waste my time on you
But paybacks a bitch, you'll realize it soon
Watch your tires
and Lock you doors
Lord knows, how many people break into the cars of whore
Run your fucking mouth
When we were straight
Fucking Drag Queen looking bitch
Always trying to loose all that extra weight
Complaining about your ass, when you should notice your face
Bitch you just got me started, better stop me before it's too late

Author notes

damn I feel better! LOL BOY GEORGE OMG Michelle A.... LOL
The flower is for her grave site... LOL
Written July 30th, 2004

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  • Rodney
    August 13, 2004
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    DAAAAAAAAMN!!!!!! Can almost feel the teeth and talons on this one. You said Boy George...HAHAHAHAHAHAHA....BOY..HAHAHAHA.
    Anyway, cool vent.
    Thanks for sharing.
    Rodney

  • fkroerank69er
    August 12, 2004
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    awsiomeeee!!!!!

    fucking awsome.. i love that one i like the part when you say her face looks like a butt.. haha


  • Dutch Doll
    August 12, 2004
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    yikes! Great write, i feel some ummmm anger ... there, backing away now....
    no really this is great, i like a lot.

  • creatoars
    August 10, 2004
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    Great way to have fun and express your anger at same time great. Might want to edit this line -
    I wouldn't waste my breath a you-typo


  • Mishielle
    August 6, 2004
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    hehehe thanks fo the comment! You gotta read the rest of my new stuff!


  • Dissonant
    August 6, 2004
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    Bloody hilarious

    LOLOL OMG!!! This made me laugh SOOO much. MAN it was visceral and one I think we all could share with that erm... "special" someone.. yeah... special in a short bus kinda way. I have encountered my fair share of beyyotches in my time and I'd LOVE to have said this kinda thing to their faces. Thanks for a good laugh and a cathartic read. Much love, Nate. xxx

  • Kym
    August 4, 2004
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    Ouch! Full of piss and vinegar, but it's a good way to get that anger off your chest! Yeah!

  • Mishielle
    July 30, 2004
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    yea it was meant to be funny LOL I hope you enjoyed it!


  • MariaAQ
    July 30, 2004
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    lol i dont no if this was ment to b funny but i laughed many ppl can rlate to this how they worry about bein popular but its not worth it

  • Twol0st2bf0und
    July 30, 2004
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    HAHA, OMG Michelle, this made me laugh so hard i cried! Oh man, if theese people only knew kelly. I'm surely positive they'd laugh they're asses off too. Shes such a shit talker dude, don't even worry about it. Anyways, you know you could beat her ass if it came down to it. And as for Christina bein mad over it, That bitch needs to mind her own damn business and if she insists on getting into other peoples then she should atleast get teh facts straight. But what the fuck it wasnt even you!!! God, dumb bitches piss me off, anyhow, this was funny, great job, you always turn ordinary into funny, same thing with the puddin. I just loe it, your a riot!

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