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~+*+~ confused ~+*+~

u like me or not
i know i liked you alot
what happened to us
we never use to fus
being with you always made me glade
now when i am around you i am always sad
you like me and my friend
when the hell will this love story end
you can only have 1
i feel sorry for ya hun
you say you love me one day
and the next day you hate me
you don't even aprshate* me
you are makeing me mad
not to glade
what is wrong with me
god plez help me
no help him

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mike is a ass what is wrong with me
Written July 30th, 2004

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  • Karli
    July 29, 2004
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    Yea guys can sure be retarded sometimes. Yea he needs help, not you. Thanks for sharing! ~Karli~