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Twisted Figures

I see the glare in your eyes.
I see the twisted figures
I see no faith in life,
behind the faded pictures

And i dont believe in faith,
I dont believe in anything,
What was once something,
became a hollow spot called
Nothing
I dont see how you can go about feeling fine
When you know your life's about to end
an inch down the line


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Written July 29th, 2004

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