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Lupins Memories

You've no idea what it's like to be alone.
Three of your best friend's murdered,
Your closest of friends to blame.
By the time it's all said and done,
You're alone.
Alone with nothing but your memories,
And your tears
Of course everybody talks about it.
You can't walk down the street
Without hearing his name at least once.
It never occurs to them how much it hurts
To go through it over and over again.
How it shatters your heart
Every time you are reminded
That you will never see any of them again.
The loneliness would drive anybody mad.
Oh, I hope with every ounce of hope
I've managed to retain through all this,
That you will never, ever be half as lonely
As I have been for the past 12 years.

Author notes

I was inspired to write this when I was watching the 3rd movie..Lupin was sleeping on the train and HRH were talking about Sirius wanting to kill Harry..and I was thinking, what if Lupin wasn't asleep? What if he was actually listening..Then I figured he probably had to hear people talk about what Sirius "did" through out the past 12 years...and it made me sad to think what was going through Lupin's head...he must have been so alone...
Written July 29th, 2004

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  • February 2, 2005
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    That was interesting....


  • Lonely
    August 1, 2004
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    very nice

    this was a great idea to write about Lupin and how he feels about everything.. great poem here thansk for entering and best of luck

    Love,
    Lonely~

  • PunkRckPrincess
    July 30, 2004
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    thats an interesting thought...I hadn;t considered that until now ...great job
    *~Punkrockprincess~*


  • Feline2001
    July 30, 2004
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    ahhh that's such a sad way of looking at it-but so true! This brought tears to my eyes. I love Lupin anyway-and have sympathised with him throughout-but yes-how sad is this!