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Keep Dreaming

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Finding ones dream is a joy to behold,
echoing throughout your mind till found,
always surrounded by visions of hope, 
made up of God's wondrous sights and sound.

Though some dreams appear impossible,
and may elude you for a while,
with determination and sheer desire,
pursue it for that extra mile.

Sometimes our dreams are never found,
not fulfilled they wither and die,
now and then you still see that dream,
in a vision with tears in your eyes.

Many times our dreams do come true,
they  don't have to be big at all,
the dreams that make you happiest,
are sometimes rather small.

searching for dreams start in childhood,
parents make your dreams come true,
as you grow into a man or a woman,
finding you dream is  now up to you.

A dream can be anything you desire,
a job or baby, or husband or wife,
don't ever stop pursuing your dreams,
they motivate you through your life.
 



 

 

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Written July 29th, 2004

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  • Mylee's comments hit it home on this one. Great work! I really love how your rhying doesn't seem forever or anything. IT's comes so natural so it works.

    Gabby
  • "A dream can be anything you desire"
    Beautiful! This gives anyone who has a dream, no matter how big, how small, or obsecure it may seem, that its YOUR dream and you can make it whatever you want it to be! Thanks for the uplifting thought!

    Mylee

  • Ladybug
    July 29, 2004
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    dreams due keep us alive!
    a beautiful write and reminder
    Tamara

  • twitch
    July 29, 2004
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    "the dreams that make you happiest, \ are sometimes rather small."
    this is so true. this is a beautiful poem. fantastic job!

    ~Iz
  • Morgana
    July 29, 2004
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    how true...without dreams, we'd be lost. After all, dreams are the start of new things, hopes, achievements... Excellent write!

    -morgana
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