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Surrounded By Music

When the world surrounds me
And I start to choke
I put on my headphones
And it all disappears in a cloud of smoke

When anger is building
I see red in my eyes
I just press play
And kiss it all good-bye

When the pressure is high
The weight is on
I surround myself with music
And all of it is gone

It’s where I go
To be blissful and quiet
Where my mind is at ease
Not such a riot

Music surrounds me
I hear words in my ear
And as the world goes by
This all I hear

Author notes

Yup.  I love music, and that is why.  It helps me think, it puts me to sleep, and it calms me down.  Amazing isn't it? lol.
Written July 29th, 2004

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  • AriesBorealis
    June 13, 2005
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    I really connect with this poem. Great job.


  • PistolServce
    July 29, 2004
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    wow. I love music as mucho as u do! Great write, great read.!


  • iznogoud
    July 29, 2004
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    Very Very!

    Very simple. Very discreet. Very effective.


  • Dropp Deadd
    July 29, 2004
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    amazing poem about music.so true!I can relate to it.music is my fucking life!!!!!!keep it up!!!!


  • xmissingxsockx
    July 29, 2004
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    I know exactly what you mean, using music to escape from reality. Great poem


  • aura
    July 29, 2004
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    Good one here.I enjoyed this.Very very interesting.simple and direct.loved the rhymes.

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