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Harden My Heart

Harden my heart
I can’t even be your friend
As much as I love you
I can’t go through this again
Harden my heart
Let time erase
All we shared, the love we knew
The beauty in your face
Harden my heart
God let me walk away
Give me strength and courage
Let this be our final day
Harden my heart
I can’t walk this path alone
Wipe the tears from my eyes
Let my heart be made of stone
Harden my heart
Let me weep no more
I know there’s something better
Lord for me you have in store

Author notes

Another one for my husband...
Written July 28th, 2004

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  • xKraziiPinkyx
    September 19, 2006
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    thus us an amazing poem i really like it<3


  • Lyrical Soul silver member
    August 23, 2004
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    This is straight from the heart. I felt every word and am very familiar with this emotion. ((hugs)) You'll find your answers.

  • Northern Redneck
    August 2, 2004
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    Great poem. I like that fact even though you are heart broekn, you realize there may be something better in store.

  • MtnGirl98 silver member
    July 28, 2004
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    hi, thanks, what two ways? ha, i can only see the ONE way, what its really about since i'm living it!

  • Dee Death Strike
    July 28, 2004
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    Very well done

    Very good poem...can be taken in 2 ways, but hey, it's a really good poem..keep up the good writing! smile

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