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You Havent' Lived

You havent lived
Till you've died inside
You havent lived
Unless you've cried
You havent lived
Till you made love in the rain
You havent lived
Till you've died from the pain
You havent lived
Unless you've looked in his eyes
You havent lived
Until you've believed all the lies
You havent lived
Unless your heart's been broke
You havent lived
Till you've been the brunt of the joke
You havent lived
Until you've been set free
Well I can finally live
and love me for me.

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Written July 28th, 2004

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  • Innocent Demon
    July 29, 2004
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    Really heartwarming. and i love you too for a job well done...i hope that doesn't sound too corny. ^_^