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paper paper thin supermodel hero save me woo woo woo

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Written July 28th, 2004

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  • dasketmcphluffy
    April 26, 2005
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    short, but cool

    Very short. Don't know what it means, but i guess i need to write more in this comment than you did. That's allright; one-liners are great.

  • underground
    July 29, 2004
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    this poem is bomb. why isn't anyone commenting?

    dont know a good thing when they see it.