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My Motto

I'm always here unless I'm gone.

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Written July 28th, 2004

A contest entry

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  • HammeR
    February 19, 2005
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    Well I shall have to say that "never drink soap" has alot of good advice hid in every word. I think of past times when mother threatened to wash my mouth out with soap if I said any of those dirty words, I guess she wanted my mouth to be clean.....lol. I do think wackier is a word and you used it splendidly in that sentence. It reminded me of that school house rock video "so I unpacked my adjectives".......It was a hairy bear, it was a scary bear..........hehehehehe. Thanx for scoping out my motto and leaving a comment that reminded me of earlier days.
    Take care.


  • HammeR
    February 19, 2005
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    That I do know very well......lol. Not speaking of you but of myself. I too enjoy the bliss in being totally unaware at times, it seems that time floats carelessly by until something jars me back to reality and I realize that I was driving in rush hour traffic and am about to rear end the car in front of me........lol. Thanx for checking out my motto. Take care.


  • HammeR
    February 19, 2005
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    LOL cosmicrose.....I know what you mean about being too far out there and I will just say that I "may" have been accused of that before as well. Thanx for checking my motto out and take care.

  • ScarletMatriarch
    February 19, 2005
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    Oh so very true. Personally, I'll stick with "never drink soap" until I think of something wackier (is that a word?). God bless!

    Much love in Christ,
    Liz


  • cosmicrose
    December 7, 2004
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    I guess you are gone then cause you aren't here... lol I always get accused of being too far out there myself


  • HammeR
    August 6, 2004
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    See you have a natural eye for spotting things to make writes better. I shall have to try that and see if I can get all of it in the little space they give you for the motto. I appreciate you stopping in and looking over this motto for me. Always enjoy reading your writes and seeing the how you write with such technical grace. Take care macandrew


  • macandrew
    August 4, 2004
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    good

    This was a nice bit of logic. I would suggest for a clearer presentation to set some space before and after your motto.

    I like this one.
    John


  • HammeR
    July 29, 2004
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    Well, well so you think your motto is better than mine do ya....lol? I think yours sounds great though I dont buy a bit of it. Everytime I have been around you, you have always kept your wits about you. I think you are a little confused on the dinner thing though, I remember a young lady that owes ME dinner. And yes I am still waiting. So, when should I plan out outting???????....lol.

  • broken-nobody
    July 29, 2004
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    yeahyeahyeah... sure ... heres one i was thinkin about putin on mine... im here in body if not in mind... whatcha think
    haha... newayz... just thought id drop u a note and tell u that even tho u still owe me dinner i guess ur motto is kinda cool ...
    ~mel


  • HammeR
    July 29, 2004
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    No you didnt get it, because its mine and if you got it that would mean that I wouldnt have it, but I still have it so that means you didnt get it. Got it?.....lol.
    Thanx for the luck.

  • SubastioN
    July 29, 2004
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    At first i didnt get it. But now i do good luck in the contest!!


  • HammeR
    July 29, 2004
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    Well actually galfalfa I was talking about my mental state.....lol, but then you already knew that didnt you
    I surely thank you for having a look at me motto. Up, up and away..................


  • galfalfa gold member
    July 29, 2004
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    Great motto - i used to have something like that - mine was I'm usually gone unless i'm here Loved it! Goodluck in the contest


  • HammeR
    July 28, 2004
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    Hehehehe, you got that right. Poof, now you see me and now you dont.....lol. Thanx and once again I am off...........


  • HammeR
    July 28, 2004
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    yeah I couldnt let you hog up all the motto page with yours......lol. No actually when I saw yours I thought it was a neat idea and threw mine up there. Well I dont know about perfect but it does sum me up.....lol. Thanx and take care.


  • queen Moderators member
    July 28, 2004
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    Me too, then im somewhere else. I like this one very much. Queen


  • kjack
    July 28, 2004
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    Glad to see that you put your motto in here. There is not a more fitting contest for it to be in, am I right. And yours is so perfect.

    becca

  • Shaun Leigh Anna
    July 28, 2004
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    this is great but im gunna have to have you change the title to my motto, its the rules

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