I'm always here unless I'm gone.
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Written July 28th, 2004
A contest entry
- Im in love with mottos!!!!!!!!! by Shaun Leigh Anna.
300 points, ended August 1, 2004, 35 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
What did you think
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Well I shall have to say that "never drink soap" has alot of good advice hid in every word. I think of past times when mother threatened to wash my mouth out with soap if I said any of those dirty words, I guess she wanted my mouth to be clean.....lol. I do think wackier is a word and you used it splendidly in that sentence. It reminded me of that school house rock video "so I unpacked my adjectives".......It was a hairy bear, it was a scary bear..........hehehehehe. Thanx for scoping out my motto and leaving a comment that reminded me of earlier days.
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That I do know very well......lol. Not speaking of you but of myself. I too enjoy the bliss in being totally unaware at times, it seems that time floats carelessly by until something jars me back to reality and I realize that I was driving in rush hour traffic and am about to rear end the car in front of me........lol. Thanx for checking out my motto. Take care.
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LOL cosmicrose.....I know what you mean about being too far out there and I will just say that I "may" have been accused of that before as well. Thanx for checking my motto out and take care.
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Oh so very true. Personally, I'll stick with "never drink soap" until I think of something wackier (is that a word?). God bless!
Much love in Christ,
Liz -
I guess you are gone then cause you aren't here... lol I always get accused of being too far out there myself
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See you have a natural eye for spotting things to make writes better. I shall have to try that and see if I can get all of it in the little space they give you for the motto. I appreciate you stopping in and looking over this motto for me. Always enjoy reading your writes and seeing the how you write with such technical grace. Take care macandrew
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good
This was a nice bit of logic. I would suggest for a clearer presentation to set some space before and after your motto.
I like this one.
John -
Well, well so you think your motto is better than mine do ya....lol? I think yours sounds great though I dont buy a bit of it. Everytime I have been around you, you have always kept your wits about you. I think you are a little confused on the dinner thing though, I remember a young lady that owes ME dinner. And yes I am still waiting. So, when should I plan out outting???????....lol.
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yeahyeahyeah... sure ... heres one i was thinkin about putin on mine... im here in body if not in mind... whatcha think
haha... newayz... just thought id drop u a note and tell u that even tho u still owe me dinner i guess ur motto is kinda cool ...
~mel
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No you didnt get it, because its mine and if you got it that would mean that I wouldnt have it, but I still have it so that means you didnt get it. Got it?.....lol.
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At first i didnt get it. But now i do good luck in the contest!!
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Well actually galfalfa I was talking about my mental state.....lol, but then you already knew that didnt you
I surely thank you for having a look at me motto. Up, up and away.................. -
Great motto - i used to have something like that - mine was I'm usually gone unless i'm here
Loved it! Goodluck in the contest
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Hehehehe, you got that right. Poof, now you see me and now you dont.....lol. Thanx and once again I am off...........
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yeah I couldnt let you hog up all the motto page with yours......lol. No actually when I saw yours I thought it was a neat idea and threw mine up there. Well I dont know about perfect but it does sum me up.....lol. Thanx and take care.
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Me too, then im somewhere else.
I like this one very much.
Queen
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Glad to see that you put your motto in here. There is not a more fitting contest for it to be in, am I right. And yours is so perfect.
becca
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this is great but im gunna have to have you change the title to my motto, its the rules
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