Greenish black silhouettes of trees
sans the complacency
mystique in their conversation,
A stream of uneven triangular arcs
in commune with the lilac-grey puffs
of floating vapour
coalescing in rebellion,
Scent of wild delicate roses
a lovers temptation,
Cascades of prismatic water
falling like emotions hard
then, mingling plan-gently
in the river of thoughts,
A lavish pristine green meadow
inventive in its own league,
Celestial beads of a night crown
defying the theory of existentialism,
What a euphoric serendipity!
To perceive the natures mosaic charms.
Author notes
Written July 27th, 2004
A contest entry
- No trophy? No problem! by hereonearth.
300 points, ended August 7, 2004, 94 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
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amazing write!I was too caught up peeping through this kaliedoscope!
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excellent!
Wonderful word use for an excellent write!
This forms a lovely vision with a fragrant over tone!
I like the way you crafted this piece with so much for the reader to feel and experience.
Fantastic writing! -
Very nicely done.
I loved this part:
"Cascades of prismatic water
falling like emotions hard
then, mingling plan-gently
in the river of thoughts,"
I like the comparison you made between water and emotions falling.
Keep on writing,
Anulka -
Wow! This is gorgeous! I agree with Poet Raja on this...it's so fragrant! This poem is so fragrant and delicate. It's beautiful. It's really lovely. I love nature, so therefore I love nature poems, and so therefore I love this poem!
. Your vocabulary in this is also really unique and impressive. Thanks for entering my contest and good luck!
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Lovely , Lovely
Yeah, Natures beauty is ever mysterious and it charm? Overwhelming, so fragrant and tender.
Serendipity indeed!!!
Love from India - Joel -
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