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Waiting

Everyday, I spend missing you,
My heart is breaking and aching,
All I'm feeling is blue.

I need to see you again,
Tthe time is ticking away,
It's getting harder and harder each day.

My heart longs for you everyday,
In every way.

Missing you is what I do,
Until I see you again.
Please come and save my heart
From the enemy within.

The pain is getting too much,
I'm missing your touch.
Please return soon,
I need to see you again.

Author notes

Vampirepixie = on vacation... miss her bunches...
Written July 27th, 2004

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  • SliptheFlitch
    November 19, 2004
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    ah god. This I understand. I adore your descriptions and your meaningfulness. Your poems express such a deep longing, and I am moved by every one.

  • DrivingTheLamb
    October 3, 2004
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    awesome

    good write. keep it up. it does suck mising someone. ive lost a friend that i miss a lot. and everytime im away from my girl i miss her. nicely written keep it up


  • TwiztedAndAlone
    August 6, 2004
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    Aww! It sucks hardcore doesnt it?! Missing someone so much
    is one of the really hard things in life..well to me anyways!
    I know exactly how ya feel! But its really sweet that you wrote
    this for her! Good luck in your relationship!!!

    twizted bizkit

  • vampirepixie
    July 29, 2004
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    aww...i dont think you'll ever let me go on vacation again,lol, unless you're with me lol. sorry to upset you soo much..but dont worry... ur <3 = saved!!
    love always
    your dark angel
    mandy


  • July 27, 2004
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    I really like how real and true this poem is. Good one

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