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Missing You Too Much

I did not know I would ever feel this way
missing you until the point of tears
from the moment we parted at the terminal gate
and forever after
my tears have remained hot and stingy over my cheeks
questions upon questions
why could you not take me with you
why could you not stay with me
will I ever see you again
would you call for me to come to you
I do not want to think about it anymore
I miss you so much I am making myself sick
and I am frustrated
trying to function properly without blubbering all over
I loved you and you left me
but not because of a love gone wrong
because you asked me to wait for you
so you could finish school in a country far from mine
and I doubt I can wait
because missing you is becoming my entire life
and I need to work and eat and sleep
without trying to miss you
so hurry back if you intend me to wait

Author notes

i like dark purple<--- is this where I need to put this
Written July 26th, 2004

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  • Diseased Mind
    July 26, 2004
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    that's so sad. you described the feelings very well. this was so emotional. i like how the person is going to come back. great write! keep it up


  • July 26, 2004
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    I liked this poem alot because I can really relate to it... infact that's kinda me right now so..! Your'e great- keep writing!
    ~Blinky Luver~


  • Karli
    July 26, 2004
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    Awwww this is sad/sweet. It can be so hard to be away from someone you care for especially if you really love them. Good luck, thanks for sharing! ~Karli~

  • Echos Of Rain
    July 26, 2004
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    That was a tearjerker. It was a very good poem. I like it a lot. I hope you get the one you're waiting for back, if in fact you're the one who's doing the waiting. Keep writing and never let anyone get you down!
    Bailey


  • SiMPLiFLoETiC
    July 26, 2004
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    I like this poem I kind of know the feeling but not really well great job and keep on writing and Ill keep reading!
    MaRyJaNe


  • JenP
    July 26, 2004
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    We've all been here, though maybe not the same situation. I know I can relate. It's really hard to wait like that, I'm sure you can do it with a little hope

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