Nothing keeps me warmer than your gentle embrace
Feeling your bosom press tightly against my chest
Makes my heart pound fast
Makes even my toes tingle in ecstasy
You are my drug, my dear lady,
You are the one who should fulfil my dreams
Who should make my fantasies become reality
You are my barrier, my dear lady,
You are what stands between me and nightmares
You keep me safe from evil and harm
Need I say more?
Do these words already prove enough
On how much I love thee?
I may not be a Shakespeare
But I am a man in love
Need I say more?
I say, yeah, I do
And that is
I love you
Author notes
Written July 26th, 2004
A contest entry
- The Wonders And Sorrows Of Love by Neon Lights.
300 points, ended March 16, 2005, 27 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
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hmm smitten and yes definitely in love
Nothing keeps me warmer than your gentle embrace
Feeling your bosom press tightly against my chest
I love the way you describe this intimacy...Wow! it's not the position per se but the feeling that iit gives you...wonderful, so to speak, need i say more
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This is beautiful. I love your description, it is so wonderful. The flow is phenominal (dont think I spelt that right)! This touches my heart in so many ways. Great job and good luck in the contest.
~Fiona~
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wonderful. love the ending. wonderfully written. great job i don't know what else to say but great job! good luck and thanks for entering ~chocolate
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Oh, now this is good! No, it is BEAUTIFUL!!! Well, you said you may not be shakespeare....but you are close enough!! LOL! I applaud this because your words flowed so perfectly....and because your words have touched my heart. You truely have a talent. Whoever you are in love with, I hope she realizes how truely lucky she is to have such a hopeless romantic
Always,
Melanie -
awesome
in love? seems like a special someone is smiling right now.,,, you dont need to be Shakespeare to write about love and life ... and so you have proven.. nicely done but then when you are in love - what can be expected ... :-)
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hey you.. yea are you in love by any chance?!
but yea.. man awesome poem tho.. no surprise.. i wouldnt except ne thing different.. i hope you know who i am... i went thro alot of trouble just to get an account so write u but yea..
Love you Dahlin
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very awesome great imagery...but maybe you put too much details ometimes you want to leave the readers to think...but it was great non the less
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You wouldn't happen to be in love would you? Expressed so beautifully from a true heart. You can just feel it in every word. Well Done
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