There are no words to describe this feeling
A feeling that only you could possibly make
There’s so many butterflies fluttering in there
It’s starting to make my stomach ache
I love the way you make me blush
And the way you make me smile
I pray to God every night
That you’ll stick around for awhile
What are the odds that we found each other
Like you said, about a million to one
It seems like we’ve known each other for ages
Yet, our friendship has just begun
I never know quite what to say
I just want to be so perfect
You keep telling me to be myself
But let’s face it, you’re worth it.
You’re the first thing I think about when I wake up
And the last thing before I go to sleep
I know I have your trust, as you have mine
That’s something that I hope to keep
You’re my favorite skater punk-rocker guy
A real down-to-earth kind of man
On the inside you might be a beach bum
But to me, you’re a fantastic boy with a tan
Luscious lips, pretty eyes, and long hair
Clever mind and a glittering personality
Perfect in more ways that one
I caught you on a technicality
I like you a lot, I really do
I don’t know what to make of this mess
What I do know though, is that
You’ve left me completely speechless
Author notes
This is about a very special guy named Matt. There's something about him that I just can't stop thinking about. I haven't known him for that long, but he seems really sweet, certainly the sweetest guy I've ever met in my life. He's perfect beyond words and I'm really glad I got the chance to meet him. I really really like him, and I hope that we always stay friends and such *giggles*. I just can't get him off my mind, and my stomach always hurts, and he makes me laugh all the time, and he values life more than anyone else I know..and ugh he's perfect. I would like to thank Shanna for having the two of us meet, I love you, Shanna. You're a really good friend for this and I don't know how to thank you! I haven't been this happy in a long time, and I now have faith that everyone out there will meet their soul mate and anything is possible.
Written July 24th, 2004
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A contest entry
- Show Me What You've Got by LostParamour.
500 points, ended September 16, 2004, 61 entries
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WWEELLLLL! Safe to say this is one of the best fricken poems I've read, I mean...wow! Poems of people we care about just evoke such emotion, dont they? You lose some flow in certain verses, but the way you choose to match words is very promising, and kinda makes you wanna whisper "cool" out loud. Very awsome, indeed. -
Thanks for entering my contest... Good luck!!! I'll make meaningful comments when I judge the poems... I'm just thanking everybody for entering right now...
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thanks andrea lol
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I know I have told you this. I don't know how to say in words how much I LOVE THIS POEM! it seriously makes me cry. It is sooooooooooooooooooooo sweet. and I can relate soooo much. I really think this is your best poem ever. I can only think of one of mine that tops this..."the lost dog" HA! But really this is the best poem ever.
What I do know though, is that
You’ve left me completely speechless
that is my alltime fav part. I love it so so so so so so so much! I dont know how else to describe it to you. So talented! So loved! I love you! And I am so giving this to SOMEONE because its exactly how I feel. You write my words on paper because I cant come up with this good of a poem!
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This was very well written. It was a delight to read, having great rhythmic flow it was a fun read. I hope one day the last one on your mind, as well as the first; will be the Lord...
A wonderful piece.
Sam
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awe...this is cute! sounds like you have really fallen for someone, hope it works out. wonderful write!
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hehehe i luv ya to kels this poem so freakin rocks ok when u get this i want u to check out 'your my bestest friend, kelsi' hehehe i wonder who its about hmmmmmm lol 
hehe i luv ya this is such an awesum poem
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hey there kelsi.. this was such a sweet poem.. tear.. i dont know what to say.. you so rock... hehehehe.. you are so talented and i hope you never stop writing.. blush****
squirrell aka matt
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