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That Girl

She hangs out with the goths at school.
She hates our crowed she calls us preps.
She's always high.
She acts like she wants to die.
Everyone picks at her callin her names we know her as that girl.

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Written July 25th, 2004

A contest entry

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  • HammeR
    July 26, 2004
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    Well is this the girl? I see that you have defined her habits here. I am glad to see that you are writing once again. Good luck in the contest and take care.