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Thoughts Of Love

Imagination running wild
Heart beating like a nervous child
I'm dreaming dreams I never knew
My thoughts of love come through for you

I'm holding close a newborn babe
These inner dreams I can't escape
I'm living dreams I never knew
My thoughts of love come through for you

One day these dreams will be so real
Stay together to never fail
Dreaming my dreams to be with you
My thoughts of love come through for you

Imagination running wild
My heart beating love just for you

Author notes

Written on 25th July 2004 at 20:26 GMT
My first attempt at a Kyrielle Sonnet!

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  • KindaCrazy
    July 26, 2004
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    This was amazing. And even better yet... you made me have to go and find out what the form Kyrielle Sonnet was all about so I got me some education too. Anyway this was very sweet and beautifully written.
    Thank you for sharing and Best of luck to you.
    Take Care
    Beth


  • July 25, 2004
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    Wow, I'm really impressed that you managed to write this poem in Kyrielle Sonnet form...really impressed. And, what's more, is it flowed smoothly. Beautiful sentiment. I really liked it! Good luck!