White powder
empty rooms
dark corners
ear-splitting silence
my body aches
my mind reels
spinning
spinning
white powder solace
for such a short while
before the pain takes hold again
and nothing else matters
7/23/2004
HeinzS
Author notes
Written July 23rd, 2004
A contest entry
- Addictions by LOVELYmurder.
600 points, ended March 24, 41 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
What did you think
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Thank you, Lm.
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Raw and very intense. I like the way you described being high (I know a little weird), it really speaks the truth. The length really adds to the effect of the poem. Your imagery was great, it really does wonders. Good job and good luck.
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it is sort of a "tribute" to the struggles of the addict. Thanks nell!
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very intense and fueled write.. you say so much in so little, great work as always
Shanelle
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Thank you, Amber! I'm pleased you like my poem. I can never predict how they are going to come across.
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good
Thats really good! I like the flow of it! Keep up the good work! -Amber-
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