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You Are...

You have always been here for me
Whenever I need you
You watch & guide me
Inspiring me to live

You have given me hope
When I've felt there is none
And you encourage me to grow strong
In my times of trouble & fear

You have picked me up
The times that I've fallen
Helped me stand again
With your kindness & pure love

I cannot begin to tell you
All the things you've done for me
I could never ask for anything more
Because
You are
   my inspiration
   my hope
   my love
   my Everything

Author notes

So, this is a kind of thank-you poem.
My boyfriend & I are going through some really tough times right now, & he always encourages me to keep my chin up.  I really appreciate all he's done for me--even before we were dating. He truly is my everything.
Written July 25th, 2004

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  • Rosalie M
    April 7, 2006
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    This is beautiful... he must really be a fantastic guy . God bless you both!

  • MysteryLady2021
    August 25, 2004
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    Geez girl it's been a while! Still an amazing writer as usual. Hope all is well in your life! Mine is finally on track! Drop me a line!
    GOD BLESS


  • July 31, 2004
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    Excellent

    Awww, this is a wonderful write. I wish you both the best in life. Take care!

  • Infereptious
    July 25, 2004
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    aww, that's so sweet. For a moment I thought this might have been about God, but it's not. A very well written poem....hmm, no critisism (sp??) I think that MIGHT be a first...
    anywya, luv yah chic.
    ~Infer~