You light up my night.
shining so bright up
there in the sky.
North Star I wish
upon you every night.
I wish I may, I wish
I might, upon my star
tonight.
I wish that you will
never leave my sight.
Yvonne J. Griffin
6/4/02
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Written June 4th, 2002
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Great short and sweet poem
I hope that all the wishes that you wish come true!
Thanks for the comment on my kids. It's been real hard to let go, but I am getting use to it, and sometimes when they come, and stay too long, I want them to go to their persepective homes. lol
Think of it, I have four different houses to visit. It's starting to be fun. Your turn cometh.
Much Love,
Renee
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Wonderful
I like it, and I love the night and heavens so much more than the day. The poem about the sun was great, but this makes me truly content.
Chris -
great
i love this one too it's a little hard to read though with the dark text but you put great thought into your writting i love it and thanx for reading my poems -
excellent
I agree with CloudRaven. I do like this poem though. It has a quality which makes me smile :) -
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short and sweet
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