Weeks have passed, and months have gone by
since I could see what I feel
I've got built up emotion, and lost fears
All the words missing something real
Each day that passes, something new to say
but the words just dissipate
I sit and I think and I try to express
but my heart just can't relate
Today the message is clear in my head
though fog still clogs my soul
This is the day that something is said
I wish that I was whole
Author notes
ahhh, it's been forever since I could write, so I thought I would give it a shot right now. This is really crappy, please forgive me. I'll edit it when the words come.
Written July 24th, 2004
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Is it weird that I don't believe in editing a poems content once it's written. As soon as you insert a stanza it's a new poem. Although this may not be your best poem I really like it and wouldn't change it.
Robin -
wow.. ok that was definately worth my time
very very kool
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Sam, I really liked this one. You need to start writing more again, I love your poems and i miss them. Always, D*
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oh sweety it's great. I love it. I missed your writings.
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aww babes everything u write is beautiful and it cood never come close to crappy!.. ur words are always perfect and beautiful .. and i love reading them.. smile! and i hope u can write more soon!
Yours,
Poison
Edited on Jul 25, 4:44 because ''.
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