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sleepless

Deep in the night,

when the bed bugs bite,

and your toes are blue with cold.

Dreams come together,

as light as a feather,

and tickles you on the nose




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sorry  another bit of whimsy...
Written July 24th, 2004

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  • cutiepie gold member
    November 15, 2006
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    Thank you

  • cutiepie gold member
    April 26, 2006
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    I had forgotten this bit of whimsey...many thanks for your comments

  • Casey Elliott
    April 26, 2006
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    Good bedtime rhyme...!


  • cutiepie gold member
    May 31, 2005
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    I love these whimseys..they make me smile and in this day and age we could all do with a small grin Thank you for your kindness


  • SeptemberFaith
    May 31, 2005
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    This is very sweet and very cute. I love childrens poems and this is simply too cute


  • dadizgurl
    May 25, 2005
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    aww so short and sweet but it shows all that you are talking about in 6 lines!! I like ALL of your childrens poems...(thats all I have read form right now . hehe! This poem reminds me of when I was a lil girl how I would always think that there were really bed bugs and monsters under my bed, I I liked this because it really brings back memories!!
    Jessica

  • cutiepie gold member
    July 26, 2004
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    Thank you for your words . It makes things worth while


  • Wildequill
    July 26, 2004
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    AWWWEEEEeee sweet.. I can just see the little thing grinnin up at ya! What a pity they have to grow up to drink and smoke and stuff..huh..? (hard to imagine). What a great stage of life for both mother and child.. not a care (at least one more important) in the world.. joy and love (and dirty nappies). Well written though - the simple ones shine a light to behold.


  • nOva-
    July 26, 2004
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    roxmysox

    awww! what a great childens poem you have here.makes you remember the easy begining years and being afraid of "The Dark" i can just see a lil' kid all wrapped up in bed!


  • cutiepie gold member
    July 24, 2004
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    Im glad you enjoyed As long as people smile the world will be a better place . Thank you


  • July 24, 2004
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    Hey this is great, I can see many a parent reading this to their little one’s when tucking them in tickling their nose at the finish too. Now I’m indeed a big one and it made me smile for sure. Incredible for sure.

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