Dear frightened child,
I reach out my hand, just to guide you from anger;
Of torment and horror, disappointment and sorrow.
The shadows that chase you, relentless, uncaring;
drive you forward, unseeing into nightmares relentless.
To show you how gentle a real love can be,
Walk with me, walk with me, walk with me.
Love.............
Author notes
Hope I read you right
Written July 24th, 2004
In a list
A contest entry
- Write me a letter by Barbie.
300 points, ended July 26, 2004, 6 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
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Many thanks Draco
wow...you dug this out of the archives 
. Strange how one forgets what has gone before...nice to call back and read some old thoughts 
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Wattle's letter was great, wasn't it? Lol, I'm glad you enjoyed my contest - this is a good letter. Thank you for entering. Caz. Xx
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Great
A truly compassionate writing great work! -
Thank you Caz, I really enjoyed entering this contest but I more than enjoyed the winners letter. Many congratulations wattle, my friend . Great work.
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You are very kind thank you.
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roxmysox
intense feeling, even flow of words, nice nice nice! every1 needs someone, this is a good write! ! ! -
Dear .............
Thank you. That's an amazing little insight you have there. Well done, you really did your research.
Love,
Caz. Xx
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