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whispering voice

  Your whispering  voice
so thrilling ,
leaves    me
confused, dizzy ,spinning
love rests in one eye
cuddles in the other,

warmth
overpower ,
fire, storms and flooding

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Written June 4th, 2002

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  • poeticweaver gold member
    April 12, 2008

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    From the title on down, beautiful word choice.
    Thanks for sharing, all the best!

    -Timothy aka poeticweaver~

  • mona
    September 18, 2004
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    Thanks Moses
    glad to see ya here reading my poem


  • Hoosierpoet silver member
    September 18, 2004
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    Yes, isn't it amazing what a whisper can do! Lovely! Writen in your usual style of combining sensual and exciting words.

    Best wishes,
    Moses


  • TheDragonsVengeance
    October 10, 2002
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    excellent

    Wonderful. So much, yet so little. Beautifully said.

  • mona
    June 4, 2002
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    thanks bonnie ,hide,Manicmuze


  • Manicmuze
    June 4, 2002
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    excellent

    Very nice little piece... :-) well done !


  • AndrewHide silver member
    June 4, 2002
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    neutral

    Good little poem.

    well done.
    Andrew


  • bonnie blue
    June 4, 2002
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    excellent

    you've said so much in just a very few words. wonderful poem, mona:)

    hugs
    bb:}

  • mona
    June 4, 2002
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    thanks webdreamer


  • June 4, 2002
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    don't touch it!

    Love is shared in the depth of your heart and word here!!!
    Excellent write!!!

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