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Confused

I wish I could stop
Feeling this way--
    Insecure
      Doubtful
        Confused.

I wish I could tell you
How I feel right now
If only I knew
How I'm feeling myself

I wish I knew
These things about me
So I could tell you
And you wouldn't wonder

I wish you knew
Why I'm me--
    Rejected
      Abandoned
        Confused.

I wish I could go back
And change some things
Just a few
So I wouldn't be like this now

And I wish I could go back
To the day we met
The day I began to be
What I've become now...

Confused.

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Written July 23rd, 2004

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  • AnaisBlack
    December 7, 2004
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    Wow! This is an awesome poem! The way it flows... and the words aren't forced... I think you're doing a great job! Keep it up!

  • Blood Talon
    July 25, 2004
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    Wow. I really like this poem! It's so...cool. I dunno how to describe it. I like the repitition you used. This poem is seriously perfect. Applause for you.
    And, I know this has nothing to do with your poem, but... *cracks up at Infereptios's motto*

  • Infereptious
    July 23, 2004
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    nice bb. which meeting person are you talking about?? I like the way when you made a list they were at dif lengths from the margin. it made it kool, and on your request, since you're buggin me I LIKE IT, see, I said it.