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Loss of Communication

I don't know what your game is
But it's hurting me
Your sudden disappearance
Has ripped me apart inside
I know you said you wanted
To be alone for a while
But is it not enough
That I'm out of the country?
I've heard nothing
For so long now
I'm beginning to think
That you no longer care
Don't make me think this
Not now
Not when I've finally found
A friend worth fighting for
Don't let me be wrong
Don't let me slide back again
You've taken away my heart
Please don't come back alone

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Written on 23rd July 2004 at 21:11 GMT

For Tanya

I'm home from university for the summer. Tanya is my best friend who lives where my university is. I've only heard from her briefly since she broke up with her boyfriend three weeks ago. It's pissing me off and scaring me at the same time.

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  • megsanangel91
    July 23, 2004
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    I know how you feel. At the moment i'm mostly scared for my friend but then i start getting pissed of thinking what if she's absolutely fine and just doesn't want to talk to me? So i know where you're coming from. This is a good poem. Thankyou for entering it and good luck in the contest.
    Meg