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Silent Screams

Silent Screams
inside my heart
Silent Screams
wanting to get out
to run, to cheat, to steal, to lie.

Silent Screams
burning my soul
Silent Screams
wanting to get out
to cry, to laugh, to live, to die.

Silent Screams
quiet desperation
Silent Screams
wanting to get out
to play, to dream, to quit, to fight.

Silent Screams
inside my head
Silent Screams
wanting to get out
to smile, to frown, to fly
... To Breath

Author notes

Written in a moment of frustration with some family members.
Written June 10th, 2004

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  • eternalpoet
    July 24, 2004
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    5 stars *****

    oo.. great.. fantastic... this is the frst of all your poem that i am reading.. and i am sure i gonna not leave reading you so quickly... the title itself plays a big role .. as if it is an irony... and thats what made me make a click on this poem... just great... take cares and have a nice time... just keep it up dear friend... your humble little friend..... .... ... - vic

  • tany24
    July 22, 2004
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    Thanks for commenting on this one too. I definitely felt better after writing it. It's only way i felt better about the situation at the time. I'm glad you liked this one too.


  • July 22, 2004
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    wow... another good one you have real talent... i hope u find a way to get that emotion out its not good to keep it in... i know writing it helps i hope u felt better after writing it down... i look foward to reading more of your work. ::keith::