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Nobody Knows

Nobody knows
I cry at night
Nobody knows

Nobody knows
I live in fright
Nobody knows

Nobody knows
I put up a fight
Nobody knows

Nobody knows
I slip out of sight
Nobody knows

Nobody knows
Nobody cares
Nobody's awake

Nobody knows

Author notes

I wrote this in a moment of frustration about a family situation.
Written June 2nd, 2004

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  • tany24
    March 28, 2006
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    Thanks for the comment.


  • southernpride
    March 23, 2006
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    it shows emotion, and it pretty repetative..

  • tany24
    August 5, 2004
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    Thanks for the comment!!

  • Knight
    August 5, 2004
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    excelllent

    Very good expression,,,of personal feelings,,,


  • eternalpoet
    July 24, 2004
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    3 stars ***

    humn....this one is little or rather more different from the one that i just read before sometime... but i should say that although this poem was small.. it was somehow able to make me read it twice... take cares and have a nice time... just keep it up my dear friend..... your humble little friend.... .... .... - vic

  • tany24
    July 22, 2004
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    Thanks for the comment, i'm glad you enjoyed this poem. This is the first time i share this poem, so it means alot to me that you identified with it.


  • July 22, 2004
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    really good write it really showed lots of emotion... it touched my heart... i know where your coming from... i know what its like to feel like nowon cares or even notices you exist... anyway i enjoyed reading it keep up the good work ::keith::

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