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Betrayal

Betrayal;
The worst type of pain.
When you 're betrayed,
You don't know what to do, at first.
Then,
You gain mixed emotions.
Hatred, sadness, anger, depression;
These then become your friends.
When they say,
"There are worst things than death."
They were right.
Betrayal is one of those things.

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Written July 21st, 2004

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  • Neon Lights
    October 28, 2005
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    Nice write. you captured betrayal so well. And I really love the wway this is written. I can really realte to it. Thanks for entering and good luck!
    ~Fi~

  • Praise his name
    October 11, 2004
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    Being betrayed is a bad thing Yet another poem Marcus you have written that I can relate to.
    God Bless
    Mary

  • clear
    July 22, 2004
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    ..hey nice poem...you decribed being betrayed so well..

  • poettess
    July 22, 2004
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    Thats a good poem... sad but i really do like it