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Act of The Fool

morose performer
scatters grimness through the crowd
bursts with hearty grin

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Written July 21st, 2004

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  • J Rhys Davies
    October 15, 2004
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    I love this. I guess mainly because it so reminds me of myself. In high school I was always the class clown, just to put a smile on faces. I joined drama and found that I had a talent for playing someone else. I guess it was easier to be them, instead of me. Go figure. Thanks for giving us a nice write to enjoy.

    ~ John


  • Queen Mab gold member
    September 21, 2004
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    Hmmm..I get it, but I don't at the same time. I think that's a good sign. It means your taking your poetry to new depths.
    ~Bezoar


  • Night Hope gold member
    July 21, 2004
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    *hug I'm really liking what I've been seeing lately in your writings, my Friend...I can see you're stretching your wings!!!...swan