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ASummer Pond

At the foot of the hollow and rolling hills,
I hear the call of the bob-whites and the whip-or-wills.
In a pool of rippling water the cattails stand
Silence and stillness amid a wind tossed land,
Minnows are chasing all about a race thats never done,
Clear in cool shallows, under a humid sun
Water filled with plants a rich moss green,
Snakes and bullfrogs down paths unseen
Tired old  cows come to the muddy waterside
Wades out and cools her tired burning hide
Tree frogs  break out in a joyous song
Fireflies hover and float in plants along the way
Summer ponds settles down to sleep
Just awaiting another day.

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Written June 2nd, 2002

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  • Melodies
    June 22
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    Taking this lovely poem to Poetry Planet! Thank you very very very much.


  • gullionmar
    March 3
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    lovely

    very well written blush have a great day


  • earthstar
    August 21, 2006
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    excellent

    This is lovely sounds lovely to visit. KInd of like a vaction in the mind. It is beautiful, wonderful. It is very relaxing to the mind. You write so well. I love the poem. Thinking of you wanting to read a delight take care your sis sending her love to you b


  • Eliza Simmons
    February 3, 2004
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    loveme

    Good diction and nice imagery. Enjoy much.


  • AndrewHide silver member
    June 9, 2002
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    don't touch it!

    This is a beautiful mindscape,
    written well.

    Andrew


  • nell
    June 7, 2002
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    excellent

    this is indeed a beautiful and well worded piece, i did very much enjoy


  • AngelEyes323
    June 4, 2002
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    excellent

    Beautiful imagery, beautiful poem!!!
    -Kathy


  • myrataal silver member
    June 2, 2002
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    neutral

    Yes! I am there, too ... now what a happy gathering: away from all dark and cold ... thanks, Susan, and also for reading my work.


  • Blushfulmoon silver member
    June 2, 2002
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    Thanks you all and i gotso tickled reading gozling comment about the skeeters then went to my moms and sat on the front porch swing and lo and behold in came the skeeter lmao so cute i needed this today thank u all!!!!Blessings Susan!

  • soulful
    June 2, 2002
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    excellent

    enjoyed sitting by the pond... beautiful


  • Windsong
    June 2, 2002
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    excellent

    beaitiful picture, i can almost see myself there, by the pond!


  • June 2, 2002
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    don't touch it!

    *sigh*

    enjoyed this thoroughly!!!

    cept can you pass the bug spray? skeeters gettin me :)

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