My mind wont let me forget about you
But I only remember the shitty things you do
I want these thoughts to be locked away forever
I don't want to think about you anymore, never
What you did to me was wrong
I don't know why I was your friend for so long
You were always just so needy
And when it came to life and problems your fucking greedy
I can't even stand to think about you
Your a cunt and a bad friend too
Your never going to have anyone in your life
You may as well kill yourself, here you go use my knife
Come on, I dare you, just do it
You wanna fuck with me, your about to get in deep shit
Because I don't fuck around like this
I'd rather make you drink your own fucking piss
Oh, you mad? I hope so
Because what you did to me was so fucking low
Carma will get you every time, I think you know that now
You wanna slit your throat, oh I'll show you how
Look at you, you fucking whore
Watch your blood flow bitch as it drips to the floor
God this is so fucking funny
You wanna die? is that what you said Honey?
Well here's your wish, it's coming true
Your blood is draining! your turning blue!
Now you dead, that's what you get for fucking with me
I buried your body six feet under so no one can see
But it doesn't matter because I know the truth
You have lost everything, even your kooth
Even if you said sorry it wouldn't have mattered
For years I have imagined hitting you so hard your brain splattered
And now finally the deed is done
Who would of thought killing you would be this much fun!
Author notes
Written July 21st, 2004
A contest entry
- Emotions ... pain, heartbreak, etc. by no1special.
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Sorry not dark enough for this dude
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Backstabbing Hurts, it makes you wonder how you got so close to that person. but wow, i can feel your anger, good flow. nice titling too.
thank you for entering my contest
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Unusual
Good poem I like it and love that twist and the end cool poem
Good luck in the contest.
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WOW!
That was a crazy scary thing/thought.
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wow i thoght this was an ex cusing and killin me is that you ..... seriously scary thanks for entering and good luck oh yeah.. im sorry
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wow i thoght this was an ex cusing and killin me is that you ..... seriously scary thanks for entering and good luck oh yeah.. im sorry
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woah
those sure are some "killer friends"
i love the intensity and emotions!!! i feel like as if i'm in your shoes and the hatred is soooo there....thanks for entering -GOREgous gore
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Sweet :)
Wow..... im so blown away by this poem.... such depth of emotions.... and itz actually about a real person..... very impressive -
hehe i can tell that you really hate her, you should thank her for your inspiration on this poem lol..great poem here filled with loads of murderous plans and so much anger flows out.. i love it....thanks for entering
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you portrayed the anger so strongly! this is great. Thanks for your entry and good luck in my contest!
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what a powerfully fueled poem....of hatred for one. you definitely convey the feeling well.
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Holy crap this is alot of anger!
I love it though .... I have anger like this to some peopl to ....
Thanks for entering my contest
Keep up the great work
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WOW!!!
The anger was incrediable, your pain so raw and usable nice job in expressing. way to make things sort of flow together. -
wow, this is awsome! it has such a great flow. i love it! did i mention it was great?lol. but ...ya.. good job! i would applaud you but i dont have any left.
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i've felt like this before, definitely... isn't it funny when people betray you, then have the nerve to say their life is hell and they want to die so people will feel sorry for them? it's especially funny when they think it will make their life look pathetic, but really no one cares. I have done this to all the people I hate (wrote about killing them never actually did lol) don't you wish it would come true sometimes? good job good luck in the contest
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i liked this poem, its funny, u said cunt, hahahah, good job
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dag on, you mustve hated this one, it makes me wonder what happened to turn you against a friend like this, we all drift apart but it is clear this person really really hurt you.
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FUCKIN AWESOME!
lol
this is great! i love the hate and the flow it totally takes away from all the "four letter words" its all cool! i really enjoyed reading this... i can relate too... i have felt that way to a friend or two at a time! I SEE FORGIVENESS IN YOUR FUTURE lol and if not friends come and go and in this case sink 6 feet under! well i really like!!! keep up the good work!
GOoD LuCk In My CoNtEsT!!
much luv,
KATIE!
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